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  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: Grounding

    I love the imagery you used in this poem! It shows the confusion of the reader, and almost makes the reader feel like their head is spinning with the narrator, ...

    Jun 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: Grounding

    I love the imagery you used in this poem! It shows the confusion of the reader, and almost makes the reader feel like their head is spinning with the narrator, ...

    Jun 13, 2021


The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
— SunsetTree