BondGirl007

Hey Litehawk! So I don't really think this sounds like Narrative poetry, because it doesn't really tell much of a story, but never the less I enjoyed it. The only ...

Hi Emmy! So first off, I didn't like the italics in here, as Amy said let the words emphasize themselves. I'm guessing this like a message to yourself when you ...

Hello Rain! Welcome to YWS! If you need help figuring stuff out PM me okay? :) So tell us a little about yourself! What do you like to write? Do ...

Both done! I want to try and get 100 reviews in the next two days so flood me with your works so I can make it!!! Narrative and Dramatic poetry ...

Hey Ky! This poem actually reminded me a lot of something from Lord of the Rings, which is really cool. You've got a pretty good way of rhyming, but like ...

Hey Live, so I agree with Matt, you have a nice beginning and end, but the middle gets kind of long. I really love the beginning of this, most people ...

Dude Mo! This is awesome! I love the edges and the way the color kind of dies out as you get into the middle so it focuses more on the ...

Yay! I really like this Jon, I think it's great! :) Your rhymes don't feel forced, and you've got the poetic examples that tend to be missing in a lot ...

Hey Young Gun, photography makes me happy, so having someone ask me to review photography is exciting. Okay, so lets begin, shall we. Rainy Day- This one I think is ...

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Okay, well I'm not going to say I loved it, but it's not all that bad. I'm not so fond on the subject of "Oh he/she peers deep into my ...

Hey Ben, quick tip. While I was reading this, I noticed you used the word "Sense" or various forms of the word. That kind of threw me off the poem, ...

Okay so the biggest problem I had with this story was the way she talked about herself. Her "sparkling blue eyes" and "Petite lips" etc, and since you're telling it ...

Rawr! Evil house!! I'm going to do this if it kills me! Okay so Right Angel- Her leg's a bit too think, seeing as her arms are so thin. Also ...

Hey Shelby! First, I don't think it really needs to be rated 16+ because it wasn't all that gorey, but that's just my opinion. So anyway, what I think you ...