Boni_Bee

(I wish Nate would reply to this! :wink:)

Very nice!!! I found this very intriguing, and you did a good job with the descriptions (even if they were a bit flowery), but I enjoyed this. I can sort ...

You're welcome :) Yay!!!!! This story might be continued *beams and waits hopefully* PM next time you post more, and I'll rush over here!!!!! I think you have a lot ...

She has Microcephali (small brain), challenging behaviour, some communication problems, slight autism etc......she wears a prosthetic leg for an amputation below the right knee...

Nice...nice...the only nit-pick is that the 4th stanza didn't rhyme... Anyway, good job

I'm not sure about the spelling of some of the words, as I think they might just be the American spelling way...? I wish the story was continued... :( anyway....*sigh* ...

I didn't think I'd end up posting here, but I have some spare time, so here goes!!! I am 16yrs, and I live in NSW Australia, in the beautiful area ...

Wow, that was awesome!!!! It had me glued to the story till the end!!! Very facinating. There was a couple of spelling mistakes, but apart from that I can't find ...

6/10 because its sort of funny...

6/10 because...substitutes are not always as good as the real thing!

Interesting!!! At first, I didn't like it, but it had a good, free, spirit about it....good job!

Heartbeat, running Fleeing from a fear I Cannot see This is good, but are you talking about running mentally from something, or actually running? Silence which sears my Terrified soul ...

Wow, this is going off topic already!!! ^_^ I don't have a problem with leather, as long as it isn't from an endangered or protected animal. If you think about ...

4/10 because I don't get it..... ^_^

^Ditto!!! Yeah, get it published!!! I'll buy 10 copies of it, and give them too my friends...its great!