Boni_Bee

That didn't make much sense, TBR...lol Ok...8/10 because it's true...

7/10 because it's funny

I agree with Micha, Jesus never had a wife. He became a man, so he could go through the suffering, to pay our sins, then he went back to being ...

(Ok, here is the first chapter....what do you think?) "Miss Emily Taylor is sentenced to seven years transportation to Australia for stealing the following items: one bible, two skeins of ...

Ok, I give in :? lol

oh, just seems more like a 'he' story...

6/10 for ....? Evenesence I suppose... :roll: lol

You mean 'he'??? lol

4/10 because I don't get it.... lol :roll:

oooo, dramatic! :? :) It only had my full attention in some parts, but I like the cold, malicious way he does everything. Next bit please! Lol :)

I didn't like this. It was rather spooky, but the pace is too fast, and it gets you a bit confused. One minute he's here, the next minute he's could ...

Its cool :) Very abstract, in the characters and I like it how you have switched everything around...good job

ok, I get you now :)

Thanks, Snoink, now you've confused me!!!! :? lol, it's ok. I get what you mean...I keep trying to keep it in Past Tense, but sometimes I get off it... lol ...

Lipizzaner is a breed of horse....what is wrong with it???!!! :? lol