BookGirl

Thanks!

Thanks, I'm trying in other chapters to sort of direct it away from the two of them, but I might make a little change to their realtionship somewhere ;)

Thanks, I see what you mean and it's given me a few ideas ;)

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Thanks!

Thanks Bookwormart and Dragonet for the great reviews!

Thx I'll get on that. ;)

Omg! First off welcome, second, you're story is so cool! I like it very much, how did you come with it? I cannot wait for the next piece of it, ...

This is Chapter One continued, I was told the first was too long so I broke it up a bit ... When we got home dad disappeared into the garage, ...

I loved it! But I was sad at the end, I can't wait for Angel! Dylan wasn't very big in this story but he was likeable. Angel: The summary so ...

Twilight, the movie was not the best though it was great! I just preferred the book. Percy Jackson and The Lightning Thief, the movie was brilliant but Annabeth wasn't the ...

Just one thing, put spaces between paragraphs, I like your story though

Just some small things: 1. Don't abbreviate 2. Use spell check That's it, though I'm really enjoying reading your story

That was really good I really enjoyed, can't wait to read about Harry meeting up with the Dursleys' again!

That was so sweet, I love it! You're doing a great job, seriously.