BookWolf

You have great description and I enjoyed this very much. :D I didn't find any bad grammar or punctuation. But there were two small mistakes I noticed. I hear the ...

This is a great, emotional poem that I enjoyed very much. :D I don't read poetry much because I don't really like it, but I actually found myself absorbed in ...

Okay, so I read your comment below your story and I'm not going to tell you about all the letters you forgot to capitalize and the random periods. :P BUT! ...

Hello, BookWolf here for a review! :D First off, you have great description and you express your character's emotions beautifully. I'm already loving her personality and they way she decided ...

First off, this is an amazing story and I found myself captivated from the first sentence. The description is admirable and you paint a perfect picture in my mind. :D ...

Wow, extremely good description. :D Your skill of describing is obvious and flows smoothly with your character's emotions. I can see this easily turning into a story, but if it ...

This is a really great poem about addiction. :D Your words went very smoothly together and I really liked how you put feeling into the poem. I just have one ...

Okay, this is a really great first chapter. :D You have really good description and seem to know your main character very well, which is very important. But there were ...

Another great chapter. :D And I'm looking forward to the next part. Here are my corrections. :D “Good morning Rose.” Mrs. Ranker greeted me as I walked into the kitchen. ...

I read the other chapter, but didn't review it because other people had gotten to it first and told you about all the mistakes. :D But I got to this ...

I LOVE this story, you are an amazing writer! :D The words you use seem to go together perfectly and I can't wait to read more about what happens. But ...

Woah. :D That was pretty cool. Its very apparent that you are an awesome writer and I found your writing style very appealing. You obviously know your main character well ...

Hi, SnazzyPencil! I am here for a review! :D I really liked how you expressed your main character's feelings at the end. It just made her so much more real ...

Okay, THAT is very incorrect. It looks just like a huge block of text. You need to organize this in paragraphs and put periods or commas at the end of ...

Woah. Even though I haven't read the other parts of the story, I enjoyed this a lot. :D You have great description and you can create a lengthy paragraph without ...