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Re: Take A Chance- 1
Hey theotherone I'm Bree and I'll be writing you a review today. First off let me say this story has a good plot it just needs some tweaking. My alarm ...
Sep 5, 2010 -
Re: The Dark Prison
Wow, that's all I can say wow. The detail was amazing and as was the emotion. I do have one thing I didn't like about it, that you had someone ...
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: Shipwreck Isle ch. 1
I really liked your story but I have a few(or a lot) nitpicks. I finally came home to Shipwreck Isle the summer of my 15th birthday. I knew that it ...
Aug 10, 2010 -
Re: A Queen's Kidnapping
I really enjoyed reading this story. There were a couple of grammar and spelling errors but otherwise good job. I really want to know what happened to her parents it ...
Aug 3, 2010