BreenaJames

The week passed in a blur and I couldn’t believe that we were (you should change this to "it was" so that it makes more sense finally Friday. And it ...

I'm still editing it so I didn't mean to post it

do not read hit submit instead of save!!!!!!!

First of all, thanks to everyone who reviewed my story. Second I'm working on an edited of version. Oh and to answer Fire's question technically I wrote the story before ...

Thank you, this is soooo much better. I think that you made a few typos here and there but otherwise very good. By the way I'm writing my own fantasy ...