BroadwayGirl

This wasn't the greatest poem but it wasn't awful All I'm asking is for you to make it romantic if you want it to be romantic and correct your punctuation ...

After all the trouble we went through to get the Christmas Tree, it is finally here I put ornaments on one by one hoping that I will feel an emotion, ...

I look down at my shaking hands pale and covered in blood I slide up along the bathroom stall when i look outside the door to the mirror my face ...

hi meg!!! its emily awesome poem, great descriptive writing maybe try reading over after you write it for spelling errors(makes it easier to read) Hope to see more work soon ...