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Prologue The infant wailed as Jayston Hart set her down on the metal operating table. Shakily grasping a nearby needle, he injected his small child, watching as her eyelids slowly ...

This is a well written poem. I liked the description the line "Just remember if all the Worlds seas were ink" because I think it is fairly easily imagined. In ...

This is a really well written poem. It is interesting and I like the description in it. My favorite lines are "in the golden autumn morning. Breathe in the fumes ...

I really liked this poem. I enjoyed the way it was written and the humour of it. It was amazing and I can find no problems in it. Overall, I ...

I enjoyed this poem. I found it quite well written. The poem doesn't have much flow to it because of the punctuation, but it still sounds pretty good. My favorite ...

Prologue The newborn squealed as her mother swaddled her in a blanket, tightly woven by hand from the finest grasses of the land. Gently lifting the infant, she cradled it ...

I really enjoyed this poem. I especially like the way it flows and the way you described everything in the first part of the poem. My favorite lines in the ...

That was a wonderfully written poem. I like the description and the way you finished off the poem. My favorite lines are "the branded D on his cheek, burning with ...

I close my eyes, and to my great astonishment, Gracefully feathered wings lift me. I will myself to soar, High above the flowering plants and towering trees. The water daringly ...

I think this poem is amazing. The punctuation really gave a great effect to the overall poem and made it much more dramatic. It was a great poem and I ...

I found this poem excellent. It flows quite nicely and is well written. I can't find anything in this poem that could be improved. You did a wonderful job.

Wow. That is very beautifully written. The wording is amazing and it flows very well. I found it wonderful and can't find anything about it that needs to be improved. ...

This is a wonderful poem. I found the first few lines amazingly written. I like the way you repeated the first few lines at the end and the effect it ...

I thought that this poem was amazing. It took me a few times of reading it to understand but it seemed to get better every time that I read it ...

This is Isha on her cousin's account! Just so you all know... >.> TARRION I wrapped an arm around Domi's shoulders and stared at the new-comers. Glad to hear that ...