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BrumalHunter

The Astral Plane

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Spiritual Re: Ordadus- Chapter Four

    Salutations, my dear friend. Chapter Four has arrived! And you need not worry about it taking so long; my own chapters are very far overdue. As for the review, you ...

    Jun 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter six

    Salutations. Finally, some action! I think Braxton is a fool for having refused the woman, though; he should simply have agreed and attempted to stay incognito. I suppose it is ...

    Jun 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter five

    Salutations. I now understand why Braxton dislikes his family so much; his younger brother is an egotist, his older brother is... uhm... my point exactly, his mother is indecisive and ...

    Jun 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter four

    Once again, I greet you. Thankfully, Braxton seems to be less spiteful now, but his younger brother is still as obnoxious, vainglorious and stubborn as ever. I am also happy ...

    Jun 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter three

    Salutations. This is another well-written chapter, but what I mostly do not understand, is why Braxton is so condescending towards the palace. It is his home after all, and if ...

    Jun 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter two

    Greetings, my fellow-tribute-but-not-for-much-longer-as-the-Games-are-at-an-end. I am certain I have reviewed this novel at least up to chapter four, but seeing as the website *shakes fist for dramati

    Jun 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Other Re: Life or Death? Chapter 5~ Untitled

    I suppose I have returned for another review... Well, I certainly hope you have improved the quality of your writing, since your previous chapter left me wholly disappointed. “So tell ...

    Jun 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Politics Re: Vryheidsoorloë-- The Freedom Wars

    Greetings, young one who is interested in my home language. While I was scrolling through the latest of the YWS Hunger Games threads, I noticed an Afrikaans word amdist the ...

    Jun 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Thunder and Ice

    Greetings, my green-scaled friend. Once again, I have heard your call-to-arms and I shall do my best to ensure your survival! :smt027 Across the backs of the Alps ride I ...

    Jun 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Other Re: Life or Death? Chapter 3- Getting to know the victim?

    My sincerest apologies for returning at so late a time. *bows head in shame* Anyhow, I have finally arrived and shall now proceed to review your chapter. Oh, the sights ...

    Jun 4, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: My Cornucopian Gift: Sonar

    Salutations, my fiery friend. We tributes from District Two must watch out for one another, and so, I have heard and answered your call to arms! :smt027 That couldn’t have ...

    Jun 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Memorial I: You Hold Their Memories

    Salutations. Normally, I do not review poems, as I am not the best at analysing them and because they are so short - I specialise in spelling, grammar and vocabulary ...

    Jun 2, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Start of the Hunger Games

    Greetings, my friend. I had promised you that I would review your entry, and so, here I am. Glancing back up at the cornucopia, I final decided that I’ll take ...

    Jun 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Spiritual Re: Ordadus- Chapter Three

    Greetings, my friend. I realise this review is long overdue, but I am here to pay my debt. His steel blue irises were encircled with red and his cheeks were ...

    Jun 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Thunderstorm

    Greetings. I saw your plea for help with punctuation, so fear no more, for I have arrived. I shall even aid you in spelling and grammar, should those aspects of ...

    May 31, 2014


Every time I’ve gotten feedback that was hard to take it was usually hard to take because there was truth in it and I didn’t like that (or didn’t want to receive it). That’s not to say all harsh feedback is good or that we should be harsh for harshness’ sake, but learning to absorb truth without letting it break your inner core/break you is a lifelong skill that keeps your mind elastic and open to learning.
— soundofmind