BrumalHunter

Another review on the same day? Whoo! Impressions: 1. Yeah, I have no idea why I said tentacles... I believe I used "vines" in the following chapters. 2. You'll just ...

Thank you for your review, Tort! Impressions: 1. Hey, at least it's out of the way, so I don't have to worry about it later. I can ascribe it to ...

*facepalm* So that's what you meant! I think "high school-boy" might remove the possible ambiguity, yes. I suspect having high and school on separate lines has something to do with ...

I shall do so, and you're welcome! I looked at the paragraph again and realised it should actually be "make", since it's several things being listed. However, when you refer ...

I'm back again! Note: 1. Actually, somebody has - multiple times, probably. (I'm not certain whether you are one of the contributors, but meh.) As always, I'll keep this in ...

My response was eaten! D: Well, I blame the diacritics. (Blasted things.) I'll rewrite it tomorrow.

You're welcome, and, as always, your reviews are much appreciated. :) Notes: 1. At first, I didn't understand what was wrong with my opening paragraph, but then I realised it ...

There's no problem at all! The only reason I'm not reviewing today is because I still had to finish my chapter and that our internet capacity is being stretched. (Un)Fortunately, ...

Oh, and I couldn't understand what you had said about the one sandwich, but I read the scene again and realised I had edited it. During this edit, I had ...

Yes, of course, how foolish of me. I had written this part with the previous ones in front of me, so I didn't realise that it could be confusing. I ...

Darren underestimates his mother because of her profession, but yes, he is foolish to think his father is his father simply because his mother's Shiny. (Am I leaving yet more ...

Thank you for your review. And yes, progress is slow, but once Darren reaches the end of his week, the action will start rising, as I've said. However, I must ...

Gah, and it just has to be this chapter that needs editing! Note: 1. Yeah, my descriptions were rushed, which is why they lack proper attention. Sorry. Impressions: 1. That ...

Thank you for your review! 1. The reason I paid very little detail to the battle and the test is because they aren't important. In fact, the important part isn't ...

I was trying to complete a character profile, but since I had woken at 5:00 am yesterday morning, each time I closed my eyes, I almost immediately fell asleep. Eventually, ...