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Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Seven, Part Five - Not so Great Expectations
Thank you for your review, Buggie! General: 1. Actually, the reason I've never given much detail to Darren's surroundings is because I didn't pay much attention to the village's layout. ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Six, Part Three - Midweek Action
That's fine by me. :) 1. Typo = fixed. 2. I'd also prefer to use Special Attack for any Fire type, but Arcanine's predominant stat is Attack, which is why ...
Nov 28, 2015 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Six, Part Two - Midweek Action
Salutations, again. 1. Ugh, why do my chapters have to be so long? 2. Well, it depends. If you Tackle someone, you will definitely feel it, but you'll only feel ...
Nov 28, 2015 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Six, Part One - Midweek Action
No matter how unorganised your paragraphs are, they are always useful, so I am grateful nevertheless. ;) 1. I am seriously neglecting the village's layout. Bleargh, I'll have to draw ...
Nov 28, 2015 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Six, Part Three - Midweek Action
Ah, of course. I'm commenting chronologically, so I missed that note on your review structure. But I like it! Comments: 1. Wouldn't it then be too sudden? Details: 1. What ...
Oct 21, 2015 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Six, Part Two - Midweek Action
Salutations, Buggie! And don't worry, it's worth waiting for your reviews. ;) Comments: 1. I assume these are like the notes, so yay! Details: 1. And these are probably the ...
Oct 21, 2015 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Six, Part One - Midweek Action
Oh, I see! Well, then... :/
Oct 3, 2015 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Six, Part One - Midweek Action
Thanks for your review, Buggie! He excels in battle classes, but not in much else, and that is why he's an average student. Aiden does well in all the subjects, ...
Oct 3, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.09)
It does, yes.
Sep 29, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.07)
Of course! Though I may have too many simultaneous projects, I know I must take things one at a time. (Poor Martin.)
Sep 29, 2015 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Five, Part Four - Beware the Watchog
No problem, though I still need to fix that one tense change.
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: The Adventures of Darren Cassidy - Chapter Five, Part Four - Beware the Watchog
As always, thank you for your review. Notes: 1. When I started reading your note, I thought you were referring to Mrs Williams' dialogue, which didn't make sense, since everything ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.05)
Not a problem at all. And yes, I saw Martin was in the next part when I began reading it. Is he the one who was rude? I think so... ...
Sep 25, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.04)
Yay! Whenever there is fantasy involved, especially in games, I practically disregard all the other races. (Except dragons - they're awesome.)
Sep 25, 2015 -
Re: The Chronicles of a Public Bus (part 1.03)
I wasn't aware of that, but I shall keep it mind for future reviews. Also, I have yet to get to chapter two, so you can edit it with me ...
Sep 25, 2015