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Turk-jitsu, and in turn, kept the dragon-riders captive in...

Apparently, it is, Monsieur Lennon says so. Where is the best place to spot a grapebird?

'Of course I do, I just can't believe that you don't.'

I agree with the previous two, it's really flowy and it doens't take long to read. I have to say i like that ta the beggining we feel as though ...

Thanks a lot and i have read it and i do think that the old fella could do with a makeover, so i'll get cracking on that and have the ...

Hey sorry it has taken me so long to reply. To clarify: this is absolutely just a short story, it may be surprising. I am seeing that everybody on this ...

Three More for a Zoo 2009 When the elevator reached the ground floor, three people walked off and a man and a woman hopped in. The man asked, with a ...

“Buddy… I’ve played….more games of…. black jack…. than you can ever… hope to.” Gladys slowly answered. You don't need to put commas after the ellipses'. And i also don't think ...

I tend to agree with those above me, i mean, some of the ideas are actually pretty good, but the overall idea of the story is vague and confusing. Plus, ...

Hey if you're interested in reviewing i haven't been getting many reviews and i'm new to this site so i figure this is the place to go. It's a fiction ...

Because you only want to do it for one chapter it almost seems like those TV shows that have spin offs and throughout the episode they switch between shows and ...

I have recently finished reading Selected Stories by Ring Lardner, just before university started again, well, actually it crossed over a bit and i am a little behind but it's ...

I';ll try and work systematically: I would try and rephrase the word 'deader' in the first paragraph. Try tan-coloured sedan instead of tan sedan. Ok, i couldn't pick too many ...

Wow this is amazing kid. I have to say, this really is fantastic. I am not a big fan o' Scarlett, but Jesus Christ i would love to see you ...

Oh god, sorry i've been busy as hell recently but i'll give these answers a crack i guess. Apparently i need to be more 'active' if not i won't get ...