Buddy.

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Hello, my name is Buddy and i am new here. I've read the rules and critiqued two stories so i think it is about time i posted my own. I ...

This is actually a really strange story and i attribute part of that to both the ending and to the writing style. I think you should probably add quotation marks ...

Hey, this is my first 'critique' so bear with me as i try to not be a complete waste of space. To be honest i think you should remove the ...