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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Haiku

    But I will edit a bit, some more imagery would surely fit in very nicely. I reread it and you are right about the lack of images. The official meaning ...

    Sep 7, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Haiku

    This is a nice way for people to understand the nuances of haikus and why the 5 7 5 is just a mere guideline, what matters is the essence of ...

    Sep 7, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Haiku

    Sep 7, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Haiku

    I knew some people would pick on my style of haiku'ing. Like there is traditional verse and modern verse there is haiku and modern haiku. I have read both ways ...

    Sep 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Perseus

    Thanks for review

    Sep 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Perseus

    I'm really glad to hear that

    Sep 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Perseus

    Comb has a lot of meanings. One of them is the zoological one and it's the fleshy red part on a chicken's head

    Sep 7, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Happy

    Yea, I see what you mean, however I have no clue how to give that bang. Next poem %uD83D%uDE01

    Sep 6, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Happy

    Hehe I like how your name is Oceans and you reviewed my poems that contain the water element. Thanks for the reviews %uD83D%uDE01

    Sep 6, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Happy

    Thank you for the wonderful review Yea, I'm still working on my punctuation and I agree it can be vague at times. Regarding my stanzas, the random number of lines ...

    Sep 5, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Chickens and Dragons

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    Hehe this is such a great poem. I have recently seen a cartoon that featured chickens as the creatures that resembled dinosaurs most, so when you compared them to dragons ...

    Sep 5, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Drowning in paper

    Thank you for taking the time for writing this awesome review! You gave me some really nice tips, like that one with shortening my lines. Thought a little about it ...

    Sep 5, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: ​A Pack of Wolves Serenades a Cloudy Sky

    Truly the raven lord

    Sep 4, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Tale of Souls - Chapter Three

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    Hello there fellow writer . Really nice story. I always loved the fantasy genre with a war like feeling. I feel that the preparations so far are the perfect amount ...

    Sep 4, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: First day of autumn

    Yea, I dunno why i used sweared instead of swore. Nice review, thank you for taking the time to write it

    Sep 4, 2020


"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites