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Re: Chapter 42: The Decision
I just have to say congratulations on getting so far in this novel, a lot of people would have given up. I read your first few chapters and I loved ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: My Truth
Wow!! Jack here for a short review. (I like poetry, but suck at reviewing it, though I couldn't resist for this one!) Well you start the reader of very confusingly, ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 7.1 Avery
I haven't read you other chapters, except the first one and I loved that so I just have to say what you have going here is a really good story. ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: Life line (chapter 1)
Jack here for a review. I have to say I love your story idea. It has been used yes, but not really in this way, when you say only the ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: The Rise of the Fallen: Prologue
Jack here for a short review. Well I love your idea her, it reminds me of Rangers apprentice and how the rangers started of. Anyway I really love this, you ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: The Copious Few. Chapter 6
Jack here for a review. That was really short but it was wonderful. Your last five chapters was from the perspective of individuals, but you narrated this and I found ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: Clawing Stroke
Jack here for a review. I first looked at this because you asked me to and because I need to review some stuff. I had a look how long this ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: Ironclaw (Book 1): Characters and Prologue
Jack here for a review. Ok firstly I love you explanation at the beginning, it was very helpful to understand that was going on. Though maybe you should remind us ...
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: Teenage Girl Fatality
Jack here for a review. Wow that was a really long story essay, but I really enjoyed all of it. As book wolf said below, when I first saw it, ...
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: After all..
Jack here for a review. First of all this flowed really well and each world was placed extremely well. To correct me I'm not great with poetry, but not once ...
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: The Celebration of Life
Man that was great, You rose a new side of birthdays. When I was young I always thought it was about the presents, though when I got older it was ...
Nov 13, 2014 -
Re: Art School Chapter 1
Jack here for a review! Ok firstly I love this story, I read through all of it and loved it, there wasn't much for a review so I will just ...
Nov 13, 2014 -
Re: Starman Prologue ( Part 1 /? ) : To Steal a Picture and Find the Moon
Jack here for a review. Ok firstly you describe this story extremely well I can imagine the bedroom really well, then the pub I swear I can almost smell the ...
Nov 13, 2014 -
Re: We all take happiness for granted.
Hey gab Jack here for a review. Firstly though I haven't read it, this reminds me of fault in our stars. Next though I really enjoyed your still of writing ...
Nov 12, 2014 -
Re: The Unknown
Ok firstly, I suggest split this up, I did read it but I found it extremely hard. If you want tog et your message out. You need to make it ...
Nov 10, 2014