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Butterfly7

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My little sister

    Hello Bhaavya! I'm here to give you a review, so that this beauty can get out of the green room. ;) I really enjoyed this poem. It was a delight ...

    Aug 16, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Three

    Hello once again, dear friend of mine. I'm here to give you a review, so that this beauty can get out of the green room. Also, because you asked me ...

    May 22, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter Two

    Hello again dear friend! I'm here again to give you a review just like you requested. :) Before we start, lemme just say that you have me hooked and that ...

    May 22, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter One

    Hello dear friend! I'm here to give you a review, just like you asked. :) Let's start. First of all, this is such a sad story! I felt the poor ...

    May 22, 2019
  • Article / Essay » Humor, Dramatic Re: Why, Internet?

    Hello dear friend! I'm here to give you a review, just like you requested! Firstly, I love how lighthearted this poem is. Also, I love the way you wrote 'Why, ...

    May 17, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: As Sharp as Broken Glass

    Hello dear friend! I'm here to give you a review. Lets get started! The first thing I thiught when I first read this was... Wow. This is incredible! I love ...

    May 17, 2019
  • Poetry » Humor, Mystery / Suspense Re: Look Here. Look There.

    Hello Libby! I like this poem! I love the way you described one thing and said something about something else, and then described that 'something' in the next part. It ...

    Apr 28, 2019
  • Other » General, General Re: Deleted

    Hi L, I really liked your story. It was very good. And, by the way, I remember that day! I didn't see any mistakes or anything, but I did see ...

    Mar 31, 2019


"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites