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Cool idea- you should look at your grammar though, because the way this is written seems almost like an outline more than a story. Also, I would consider establishing relationships ...

I'm in California, and am absolutely ADORING the rain. So, lots of pictures. :) 1. Little Bit of Bokeh 2. Rain and Textures 3. 4. Thanks! :)

This was freakin' awesome. Hilarious. I don't really have a real review for you- sorry. This was just amazing. I love the humor, and it's actually all extremely logical if ...

Dobrý den! :) Welcome to YWS! If you have any questions or anything, feel free to let me know and I'd love to help. Hope you like the site! c: ...

Hi there :) 1. I like this one- it's pretty cliche, but you have some great aspects in it that people don't usually. I really like the contrast of warm ...

Okay, so I can reading this book "The Witch of Portobello" by Paulo Coelho, and decided to summarize the parts I'd read in a poem, more for a warm-up than ...

Okay, so I'm just going to do an overall review- first of all, I love painting. I've painted for a while. And I'm terrible at it. These are fantastic- I ...

Lots of pigeons in Prague... It was a language of wings and beaks, and long migrations, where the world is always warm. It was cooing, and rustling, and the occasional ...

Chrysanthemum Eyes, you were always too much of a poker-player face for me to ever understand you. I never knew that one person could have so many layers, could peel ...

This is freakin' amazing. Excellent shading and proportions- it really looks like Johnny Depp. :) The eyes are a bit weird, but not extremely so- the thing that really bothered ...

I adore the bokeh! They provide a perfect frame for the ornament, and really draw the eye over there- also, it's wonderful that they're Christmas-y colored as well. You have ...

as the sky unravels its chemise of cirrus, you say that a man’s bare torso is flexed on the full moon, his limbs flung outward in the languor of the ...

You would probably call it my wrong turn[b](comma here) but (capital I) i say that it was fate for me to walk on that road again. That cold dark road ...

Really interesting piece- I would consider lengthening your vocabulary in it, and maybe going through for some different punctuation. Poems composed primarily of questions generally irk me to no end, ...

If you have some time, could you please look at this poem? Sorry to bombard you- I know you have other open requests. Feel free to take as long as ...