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  • Other Poetry Re: ...

    Holy fu-cow. That was somewhat brilliant. Each description was perfectly thought out, and set the scene perfectly, a scene that we may have thought of before, but never with such ...

    Sep 25, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Picking At My Nail Polish

    For a first try, this was really good. :) As you go into poetry-land (if you should decide to continue on that crooked path), you can start adding in some ...

    Sep 25, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Hello, my name is.

    Hi there :) So I just wanted to say- I thought this was really good. I think that every girl could relate to this piece in some way, and draw ...

    Sep 25, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Sunburns

    A weird metaphor. Thanks for reading! :) We sat in sunburns caring not about the sting climbing its way across our skin, cause it was being healed, or numbed, rather ...

    Sep 23, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: It begins with a pencil and white paper.

    Okay- I'm just going to start out by saying that these are a whole lot better than anything I could ever draw. Now that that's out the way, I'll give ...

    Sep 23, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Wedding in a Park

    This was an absolutely excellent piece- I love how you are able to convey so much imagery all at once. You are so concise- it's making me jealous :) Wonderful ...

    Sep 22, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Wisdom of Mr Fox

    Great piece- it really does remind me of Walt Whitman's work. :) The ending was superb, original and ironic in more ways than one. Really excellent write- I wasn't sure ...

    Sep 22, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Lightheaded Love

    This is a really rough draft, and I wrote it on two separate occasions, so it might be a little bit choppy. My stomach gnawed at the rest of my ...

    Sep 22, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: French Lessons

    This was extremely original, and had a completely different style than I'm used to. I adore it. No background is needed in any poetry, as well as you define the ...

    Sep 22, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Mouth (Black and White/Macro)

    Love this photo! Even more than I thought I would before. :) It's really simple, but the black and white works perfectly to highlight your points of interest, and the ...

    Sep 22, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Pretty Random Photography.

    Hi there :D These were pretty great- the first one was definitely my favorite. I really like the filter/color settings you have on these, but I would think about playing ...

    Sep 21, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Mouth (Black and White/Macro)

    I would recommend resizing this. Here's a link. As it is now, the quality has been destroyed by its being blown up, and I can't see it all at once. ...

    Sep 21, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Dear You.

    I thought this was wonderful- you kept on switching who you were addressing it to, and the genders were a bit confusing at one point, but otherwise, this was human ...

    Sep 20, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: -deleted-

    This was an excellent chapter- the only thing I found was "psychic" was supposed to be "physique". Other than that, I think you have a very well balanced piece. I ...

    Sep 20, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: B&W Chess pieces

    The first picture is wonderful. It has some element of mystery of it, and offers a different perspective for the pieces- more personal. Wonderfully done. I like the lighting, and ...

    Sep 19, 2010


You're wrong about humanity. They are your greatest creation because they're better than you are. Sure, they're weak, and they cheat and steal and destroy and disappoint, but they also give and create, and they sing and dance and love. Above all, they never give up.
— Metatron (Supernatural)