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So, this was great. I love the character development, especially with the principal. The simple ridiculousness of each situation being presented was excellent. There were a couple of things I ...

For having an awesome-TV-show-themed avvie. ^_^

You've created a really nice landscape for emotion-- the repetition and word choice both reflect that really well. However, I do have some thoughts as to how you could improve ...

Hi there! :) So, I want to start off with the first two lines, which REALLY reminded my of Assassin's Creed. :) A blade in the crowd... That's what we ...

I found the ending kind of funny: not because of the actual piece. The actual piece was powerful, and very serious. But as I read it, Tom Waits sang "when ...

Sequel of sorts to this: II. the carving was done: blood washed the floor red and stank like fevered fanaticism and insomnia; obscenities flew my mouth, an angel’s lips, but ...

Ahh! I'm the first one to request... so much pressure... the expectations! Ahh! Anyways- hi there. :) I was wondering, if you have some time, could you please take a ...

Hello there, person's whose WRFF feed I'm slowly taking over. :) It's me again. I was wondering, if you have some time could you please take a look at this ...

Honestly, I know nothing of lenses and whatnot. HOWEVER, for really basic tips I can give a couple of ideas. I would, firstly, recommend finding a tripod. If one isn't ...

First of all, I adore this. If this is your first attempt at poetry, then I can't wait to read more. You don't want to hear my first attempts. ;) ...

You’re tracing thoughts into the lines of my palms, soft, gentle, HARD, digging your nails into the wrinkled life-line like a switchblade cat-claw, declaring in a voice that I thought ...

My writing has become less and less coherent over the past couple of days. My mind is a blistered crusade, vengeful to the words you speak and the tones in ...

Edits done. Feedback would be warmly accepted so I could do some more. :)

Hi there :) So, onto the review. Those are quite some remarkable mushrooms! I've never seen anything like that, so big and... BIG. That's awesome. Now first, for a quick ...

Hi there! You've met a fellow fantasy/sci-fi lover here :) That's awesome that you're from England! I've stopped over there a couple of times (restrained to London and the occasional ...