Cade

I'm all for haiku! I think you've done a good job with what is considered a normal haiku. They usually describe things, especially in nature. One rather large problem: Magic, ...

Granted, you can afford the computer, but you spend the money on lottery tickets and they're all losers. :( I wish I had a doggy.

Granted, but you end up hating it. I wish I could find the match to this earring.

Emo poetry is to preoccupied with being "emo". While the point of poetry is to present emotion, it has to be done subtly and in a way that makes the ...

Oooh, yeah, that's a good idea! Or maybe names of places or made-up street names that sound Castilian. I love it when poems sound like they've just fallen out of ...

There are three cases, I guess, in which animals are euthanized: 1. Old age and sickness are painful for the animal. Yes. Why make the poor animal (usually a dog) ...

Granted, but you accidentally Apparate to Voldy's lair and he kills you. Avada Kedavra! I wish I knew which outline I'm supposed to do for social studies.

Oh, yeah, it's huge in poetry! It has a lot to do with showing vs. telling. Telling is like saying, "I am sad," which doesn't do much for the reader ...

I miss the old house and the way the night air smelled out of the city.

Granted, but you crash it. I wish the bowling season hadn't just ended. *cries*

Great tips, Brad! I do hope that people read this. Colleen

Mmm, nice. in with cinnamon and skirts flutter in the absence of crows, What does the absence of crows have to do with anything? I suppose that crows symbolize darkness ...

Ah, Lord of the Flies! Wait, I just remembered, I hated that book. The poem kind of failed to draw me in because it's just a list of images. It's ...

The second stanza was definitely the best. The first was a little bland, a little too straightforward, but the language and imagery in the second really struck me, especially that ...

That's morbid. I thought after the first stanza that it would just be a cute little bunny. Bunny go bye-bye, darn it. I think the repetition of "Run rabbit" in ...