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Thanks for the comments, guys! I really appreciate it. This poem was definitely an exercise in imagery for me, but I had a lot of trouble trying to get a ...

*pounces* Haiku! I really like this. I think it shows the depth (but also simplicity) of a haiku very well. I don't know what the title means, either out of ...

Wow, Cameron, you instant killer of stanzas! *high-five* I like it much better now, although you might want to play around with the sentence structure in the last stanza so ...

I'm still having trouble, whence, but thanks for taking a stab at editing it...it's still awfully abstract, and I think the flow was better in the first version, although I ...

Not to contradict her but simply give another opinion... Quote: Shaking hands that no longer work, Yes, at first this line caught me off guard. You imagine someone shaking with ...

Oh, no, I agree with you, Fand! I meant that the sentence structure could have been mixed up a little. Certainly, poetry should express a lot in few words, which ...

Hmmm...I imagine the dots are only there to represent indents. Ah, I should've picked up from the title that it's after a piece. It's very cool that you could write ...

Objectivism is really fascinating...and Atlas Shrugged is incredibly intimidating. I was reading last year and gave up...I'm going to try again soon. We the Living is much shorter and considerably ...

Hurrah revision! *applauds* And of course I'll look at it...if finals don't kill me. *shudders*

It can be dull at times. Rand not only wanted to write a novel, she wanted to babble about her philosophy at the same time. I liked it, though. I ...

Thanks, guys. I attempted a sonnet because I'm terrible at rhythm and structured poetry and all that. I realize that the rhythm in this poem is just a weensy tiny ...

*blushes* Thanks for the crits, guys. I have, actually, been working on this poem since late February, and it's still driving me crazy. Maybe I'll write a sequel about the ...

One small thing though, on the second line do you mean mind not minds because it doesn't ryhme with the next alternate with a s. Ah, but slant/imperfect rhyme is ...

cadmium: Spliced - split apart sliced - signs of abuse, cuts That is a very good point! Still, I think it could do without. You might just pick one of ...

(I actually had to watch the Grapes of Wrath movie in like eighth grade but I'm trying really hard to forget it so I can read the book properly.) Oops, ...