Cadi

That last looks like it's a praying mantis! Your apocalyptic photo looks incredibly awesome. Dramatic skies are cool stuff. Also, monkeys! Also also, you draw very well. Consider me jealous ...

I think it's fine, as long as it's clearly defined where you change between people. It's also easy to cram hundreds of viewpoint characters into something, and between that and ...

Below a balcony that was not my own, I plucked a fine, taut lyre string. And while the whippoorwill did cry, I continued to play my sorrowful song. The blackened ...

Below a balcony that was not my own, I plucked a fine, taut lyre string

Hey Sheep :) This is a really good picture, in all three versions. You've got the shading done nicely in both non-lineart ones, and the lineart itself is awesome too. ...

Wow. Ok, first: these are both awesome. I love the clouds, and I agree, clouds are super-fun to draw, aren't they? I also think the character's hair is done brilliantly ...