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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Spider's Secret

    Hello there. :) First of all, that's a really nice title. :smt023 The picture is nice too and looks cool, especially the web covering that opening. The openings a little ...

    May 29, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: True Love

    Hello there. :) Rudely speaking, the title (including the topic) is cliché. >.< I think you could've come up with a better title for this. Nitpicks: To be held by ...

    May 28, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Uh... hello?

    Ooh! Kittens are cute! :D xD

    May 28, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: The Magic of the Night Sky

    Hello. :) That is one interesting but simple title. xD Well, I think the first letters of 'night sky' should be capitalized. Nitpicks: The night sky expands over the world ...

    May 27, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Uh... hello?

    I actually have nothing much to say... I just feel left out because I rarely go here in the forums lol. Well, hi. :) (This is awkward~)

    May 27, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Influences

    Hello there. :) Short poems seem to have become a trend lately. xD Nitpicks: Flowing through your being, silently - Put a period after 'silently' since this is a full ...

    May 27, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Pretty Little Lucifer

    Hello there. :) I already saw this on the featured list like three days ago but didn't read 'cause I don't like the name in the title xD, but I ...

    May 26, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Polar Opposites

    Hello there. :) I'm not really experienced with visual art so I probably can't say anything constructive, but I gotta say that these works are nice. :) :smt023 I like ...

    May 26, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Faith.

    Hello there. :) I didn't expect that mine would be the first review lol. I added this on my reading list like two days ago. xD Nitpicks: Boom. Crash. Bang. ...

    May 25, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Autumn Stars

    Hello there. :) Nitpicks: I'm too cold you say and take your blankets to the couch. - Put a comma after 'cold' and 'say' - Also, I didn't get the ...

    May 25, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Peace

    Hello. :) I've got two nitpicks for you: from city noise - I think there should be a 'the' before 'city'. and the world, that is confused and puzzled. - ...

    May 25, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Just Breathe

    Hello there. :) Nitpicks: The the beast finds me. - Typo: You typed 'the' twice. I am out breath again, - You forgot to put 'of' after 'out'. my mind ...

    May 24, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Los photographias

    I like them. :) I like the third one the best. The sunlight effect on your face and on the picture is nice. :) And it can be your profile ...

    May 23, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Woman

    Hello there. :) Nitpicks: A creature of mystery, - I don't think the comma after 'mystery' is necessary. The separation of the lines, in my opinion, already create pause. A ...

    May 23, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I Don't Wanna Wear My Pants Anymore!

    Hello there! :D When I first read the title, I misread it and thought it was 'I Don't Wanna Hear My Pants Anymore!' XD Nitpicks: I bent over forwards, No ...

    May 23, 2011


Maybe what most people wanted wasn't immortality and fame, but the reassurance that their existence had meant something. No matter how long... or how brief. Maybe being eternal meant becoming a story worth telling.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Nectar of Immortality