Cailey

Thank you for the review! I want to mention that I purposely did not outright state any negative affects of technology. I wanted to make this sarcastic, so that I ...

Thank you tons for the review! I always have a few typos in there (possible and possibly) so I should really do a better job at finding them before posting. ...

Mansion maybe? I think that could be a nice solution, since house just sounds so.. plain? Ah, yeah, I do that a lot. Well, just make sure you change it. ...

Yeah, no problem.

Out of curiosity, why are you making so many separate books rather than just a full size novel?

I like it. Any idea how many books you'll end up with?

Already? Is this all of book 1?

you're welcome!

Way to put that image into my mind now, too, Blackwood.

Thank you and you're welcome! I'm glad this helps!

You're welcome! I hope it does help!

So true. This is me, after all. I'll probably accidentally skip one of something.

Yeah- you do get an interesting point of view reading that way, though. :D Haja, but now I can go through with the rest of it in the normal way ...

See. I know there's got to be more to Omito! When will the chapter focus on him? I'm so curious to find out more about him. :) Okay, that makes ...

Thank you! And I try really hard to never just bash writers. Any writing is awesome, since words are so stinking important! :) You're very welcome for the review!