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Hi there! This was certainly an interesting read. I'm all for writing that takes a look at the harshness of reality. It did feel a bit preach-y, which I am ...

This seemed like a good descriptive sort of poem. It feels very melancholy but fitting for the current season (oh, fall!). I was wondering if it was called 'Memory Leaf' ...

Hey there Singham! First off, good poem, I like the theme that you've gone with here. Certainly relateable - don't we all want to be a little boy or girl ...

Hi there. I think your opening to this poem was strong; the first two lines in addition to the title make for an interesting idea about what this poem was ...

As somebody whose average was murdered by calculus, I can appreciate this haha. This was a good read, I liked the overall idea to the poem and I imagine it ...

I think this poem has a strong idea behind it and it is a good read but I find the flow is off, which takes away from that. There are ...

This was beautiful! I really appreciated the imagery in this, honestly - wow. You got your point across and then some, it's very beautiful. I loved it because it focused ...

I am a HUGE Tangled fan so this made me happy. And now I'd love to watch the movie. Which is not a bad thing because, Disney. I agree with ...

I think this poem is good if you take it as just a study in the color red and its different uses, but I feel like you could definitely expand ...

I loved reading this. Because we've all been here, in a place where someone we want is so close and yet so far away, and no matter how hard we ...

This poem is a good way to discuss the way we see ourselves without being too preach-y, which is great. I personally was a fan of the parentheses around the ...

I once had a conversation with my aunt about how hard it is to remember that children are, in essence, little people. With their own thoughts and ideas that you ...

This was incredibly confusing to read at first but in a good way. I like the three different points of view - I'm not sure you even need to explain ...

I like how short and simple this is. I feel like it's relatable in its simplicity and straightforwardness; the conclusion is something that we all could apply to some love ...

I am honestly generally not a fan of poetry that tries to convey this kind of message because I feel it is often done too directly and reads more like ...