CaitlinGrant

Hey! Caitlin Grant here! I like this story a lot: right from the beginning it makes me want to read more about this main character. You immediately make it clear ...

hey, Caitlin Grant here! I just want to say that I think this story can really develop into something good. Some tips: -maybe shorten this post: it's super long and ...

I had this up before as 'possible story line...tell me what you think', just so ya'll know. Now, here's the big problem: I like this, but I've no idea where ...

From Chapter Five: When did life ever become so complicated? What happened to playing on a swing set and pretending to fly? I knew what happened: a reckless little boy ...

Hey, Caitlin here to review your story. It's definitely interesting, and I feel that it could develop into something interesting and unique. Now, let me see... First off, I don't ...

Hey, sorry it took me a couple days to check this out. A couple little things: You say 'the phone clicked dead'. I think the phrase you're looking for is ...

Thanks so much :D I will, hopefully. Finals are coming up though, so... I'll try!

I was really and truly alone for the first time. Staring blankly at the room around me, I sank to my knees. I didn’t cry, because I couldn’t. I needed ...

I'm not normally a fan of fantasy, but this is definitely a very interesting story, with lots of potential. The plot is developing smoothly, so where ever you're taking it, ...

Let me just say that I really like this-- there is a depth to it that really strikes me, and that's always good. One thing I noticed was actually about ...

From the very beginning, this had me hooked. It's got a great beginning, and the plotline is interesting and definitely has a lot of potential. I hope you post again ...

thanks, that's a really good point. I'll work on it!

OH. MY. GOD. So, I read all three of your chapters, and I'm seriously in love with this story. The first chapter was kind of confusing because at first no ...

Wow. I really like this, and there is emotion behind it that is clear to anyone, even if they hae no idea who this is for. I love the addition ...

Hey! You've reviewed so much of my work so well, I felt like I should check out some of yours. Most of what I want to say has already been ...