CallieAllie

Hey! I quite enjoyed this lil read! Just wanted to provide some things that I picked up (but may or may not be intentional - I'm usually pretty terrible at ...

Hey Jacob! This is a really neat story and I've had a great time reading it! All I really picked up on were a few bits of grammar and description, ...

Hi! This story has a really cool concept that I actually haven't come across in a while, it almost gives me some sort of futuristic-steampunk-wibbly-wobbly-timey-wimey sort of feel. If that's ...

Hey! I'm really sorry for such a late review, I hope you can forgive! >.< I'm going to try out giving you a lil' more criticisim than last time so ...

Hey there! I really liked this story and it seemed to flow quite well. If anything there were a couple grammatical errors and a couple other minor pointers! First off, ...

Hey! I really liked this piece of writing, it is very emotive and I love the backstory that you've slotted in! Personally, I would love to read the rest of ...

Hey! I thought this was a really great chapter, though I haven't yet read your other ones, I will be shortly! :) I've not seen Attack on Titan yet, but ...

I really liked this story! It'd be really interesting to see where it goes. A few things I noticed; - You did a really good job at describing Rosie's personality. ...