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  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Yes I did

    I thought this had good imagery, vocabulary, emotion and depth. Although I did feel that you pushed the adverbs a little too hard and at times they didn't fit well, ...

    Jan 23, 2013
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Confrontation

    I thought this was a very exciting story. It takes skill to tell a story where the only anecdote is a man driving a car, and still be exciting. That ...

    Jan 23, 2013


For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.
— Audrey Hepburn