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  • Lyrics » Realistic, General Re: Stop Comparing Me!!!

    Overall it seems like a rather poorly structured lyrical piece. To start off on line 4 it seems that the typo for "ufellowyou" makes the whole sentence seem really incomprehensible. ...

    Sep 11, 2015
  • Art » Horror, Dramatic Re: Love is Cannibalism.

    Gosh this is really good work. The symbolism for the knife really makes the entire narrative really profound as it makes it so that your "heart" is something that you ...

    Sep 11, 2015


Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins