CaptianRandom

Hey asweeney1919, CaptianRandom. THIS POEM WAS GOOD! i really enjoyed how it flowed. I ALSO LOVE YOUR PIC!!! I wouldn't have change anything. Keep up the good work, i hope ...

Hey bluewaterlily, CaptianRandom here. I loved this poem. i suck at rhyming and in poems it just flowed, which mine never do. It was very good, i can;t really explain ...

Hey Teardrop, CaptianRandom here. I liked this! You were very descriptive, explaining the pain they were going through, what was going through there mind. I have read the hunger games ...

Hey R.O.C, CaptianRandom here i have been meaning to read this story for a while, sorry i haven't, any way on with the review. I enjoyed this story, i am ...

i have read all the books, i loved the first one, it was the best book i had read in a VERY long time, The second one was not the ...

Hey ShaddowSoldier, CaptianRandom here. I don't want to to be mean, this story was confusing. my advice is to read over the story a couple of times and let a ...

Hey TheBigCheese, CaptianRandom here. I agree with R.O.C it was different. it wasn't a poem as such, but i don't know what i would call it. maybe if you added ...

Hey RoyalSeal, CaptianRandom here. THIS STORY WAS AMAZING. i didn't know what to expect, i was on the edge of my seat! I loved the ending, how he pushed his ...

Hey SilentRain, CaptianRandom here. I loved this poem, it was very sad how no one helped her. You seemed to have put a lot of time in this poem, it ...

Hi lightningbolt, CaptianRandom here. First of all i think you should have posted it under dramatic poetry. Also i think i found a error in your work. and beach's waters ...

Hey kingolions, CaptianRandom here I liked this poem, it was interesting how you put the perspective of the dead person, i loved how you did that. Also i found a ...

Hey WaywardBird, CaptianRandom here. I'M YOUR FIRST REVIEWER!, anyway i liked this poem its was very interesting i don't know why but i liked it, how the concept of the ...

Hey R.O.C I liked this poem, very good haikuing if that makes sense. I liked the snowflake one and also the mountain one, it was very relaxing to read. I ...

kingolions, its CaptianRandom here, i am so speechless, it was an amazing story, you could trn it into a novel if yo wanted, i loved the ending and i loved ...