CardDragon

Personally I liked Version 2, its words flowed more than its previous version. Though I am not sure how your song is set up. The bottom half, went it into ...

Standing from afar, looking in a bar. She is turned and I cannot earn a glance. I do not even have a chance. If I did, it would be in ...

This poem is short ans simple, but you get it. This person has been beat up or some UN-honorable crime happened to her and she wonders if she is the ...

This poem had grammar issues, there were a lot of lowercase I's in it. Which displays you were writing this quickly and with your heart and soul. Either that or ...

Hmmm...all I can say is Hmmm, this is short. Short but meaningful, and the rhyme emphasizes the theme. I read this once, I read it twice noticing gone rhymed with ...

Hello, this is CardDragon. In your story there was an error. My hearts anger from breaking into pieces was coming out of my mouth. There should be a comma before ...

will work on it. Blinking cursor right?

Spot Claimed!

really I shall post a pic.

Nice plants, Samuel Garrison and Forsakin, you look ...ur...unhappy.

Here I created some virtual people. 12102010173853.jpg A better one, but with glitches... Evange Krom..jpg Original: stock-photo-young-group-one-man-and-two-women-in-formals-over-white-1240838.jpg

Nice pictures, you shall be my favorite writer.

Amazing, a cute rabbit and laughing animals.

I have to read that book also...lame.

Please what is that first person talking about. Poems are not suppose to be presence. I actually liked that poem, it was a good poem. Though it was normal, you ...