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Re: The Tantalizing Cellphone
I love how the cell phone was a character even though it remained inanimate - you gave it a character. Very nice work. You show the modern addiction to the ...
May 7, 2008 -
Re: Harry/Hermione Fanfiction Chap. 1
It needs a little work, it moves too quickly. There is an overuse of the word "sexy" however I absolutely love the "finding the sex kitten" with Hermione's character. Ron ...
May 7, 2008