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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Frozen lakes and sugar cakes

    Aww, this poem is so cute! It is byfar one of the 'happiest' poems I've seen so far. I couldn't see anything wrong with it, besides the lack of punctuation. ...

    Oct 14, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Somewhere Around Nothing

    Reminds me of someone who is going off to war, and telling a loved one how they will come back for them. Also, how you're telling them to wait for ...

    Oct 14, 2008


This is the way the world ends, not with a bang but a whimper.
— T.S. Eliot