Cassandra

This was a unique point of view I wasn't expecting, but it worked! It didn't occur to me from the title what this would be about, but I started making ...

I really enjoyed this. Your style was amazing plus you had the cynical voice going as well. I think this was the perfect length for this type of piece: longer ...

This doesn't really fit in this forum: the literary forums are for short stories, novels, plays, and poems. Right now, this seems more like an idea: perhaps you could develop ...

First of all, nice work! You did a nice job working with such a small amount of words, and I liked that there weren't really any huge info dumps. It ...

Isn't the whole Opera Ghost thing something that actually happened, though? That's the idea I got from the beginning of the book, but what you said, Broken Sword, is making ...

Sorry ahead of time if I repeat anything that's already been said! The day of Announcement had finally arrived. You might consider capitalizing The Day of Announcement if it's a ...

I read it last year on my own and this year in class: I found I liked the book a lot better on the second reading. Either way, it's very ...

I really enjoyed reading this--I was hooked right away, and I definitely was interested throughout the entire thing. And of course, there were no spelling/grammar errors; a nice breath of ...

I really enjoyed this: you captured the moment really well, like a snapshot in time. My biggest suggestion, besides a few grammar mistakes below, is to make sure you're showing, ...

Just was once your typical, ordinary teenage boy Just? Did you mean "Jude"? He has his click of friends, You changed tenses in this sentence (had), and I think it's ...

Your description is superb; I can definitely picture this scene. I think you should add more background on the man, mostly because I'm confused about where and why he lives ...

To echo everyone else, I like the idea behind this, of everything being related and intertwined! Of coarse, there were rumours that it was another terrorist attack, but these were ...

a clean sheet of paper, and a clean space to write in. Once I looked down at my clean piece of paper, I knew what I forgot; an idea. Clean, ...

" Your late! You're late, because the contraction "you're" is short for "you are". A cloaked figure scurried into the small hut from the snow and winds outside. The figure ...

I can't crit poetry for beans, but I'll tell you the parts I liked. :D These were my favorite lines: I’m a little rusty, but so is the piano. And ...