CastlesInTheSky

Here at last to review, as requested, Angel! :D Sorry for digging an old thread up... Elizabeth sauntered across the lush green fields and twirled in the sun's warm breath. ...

Chapter 6 Anne did not desire the following day to start, but it began without her consent when the sun rose and dappled her linen curtain with apologetic rays. Wiping ...

Hi Sofi! Looks like this has already been torn apart and nit-picked, so my comments mayn't be as helpful as I'd hoped. I'll focus on overall comments, because of the ...

Merry - :D Thanks for reading. Um, I spell coloured the English way, lol. ^_^ And lol, I was using feathers as a metaphor, not that she literally had feathers ...

Hey there Kirsten! Nitpicks first, overall afterwards. I'm going to do this now until Chapter 3, and finish it later. :arrow: Do you like the characters? Are they well developed... ...

Ducati! :D Please could you review the 5th Chapter of Tipping the Velvet? I know that, being awesome, you probably would have gotten to it anyway. But I felt like ...

Lol, I know. I finished Gone with the Wind [for the fifth time!] about a day ago. I think they're just drawn to Scarlet's vivacity and spirit, she's just that ...

I really, really owe you a review. :P So here goes. The entire residence looked like an English castle reduced in size twenty times. This would read a lot better ...

So, I've finally managed to work on characterisation. I haven't worked it into this chapter explicitly, because this is where something finally happens, so it would be silly to suddenly ...

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Here as requested, dahling. :D I think that, overall, this is a very good article. However, I think you need to summarise a bit more every time you start talking ...

Ducati's is done! :D

Ooh, I do really like this, a lot. ^_^ Sorry for the time it took to critique, I would have done this review way earlier seeing as I definitely owe ...

Wow. :shock: Thanks so much for all the replies and critiques, people. I never thought more than one person would actually review this, lol. Nate - Yay, a Nate review! ...

Hi Claire Suzanne? (Both those names I absolutely adore.) Welcome to the huge, cuddly family of YWS! We're happy to have you here. :wink: You sound like a pretty awesome ...