CastlesInTheSky

Thankyou for reading and for all your suggestions, Ducati, they were very helpful. When I said she was the opposite to fragile, it's because she has this inner strength. It ...

Okie-dokie, sofi! I'm getting round to all of them, guys. Just bear with me.

It's Sarah! :D Here as requested, dahling. Forgive me if I ramble or am too harsh, I'm only harsh to people whose work is good. AKA - you. :wink: Before ...

This is a novel I have just started, set in the Victorian Times. It was previously set in 1920 but it was far too hard for me to write as ...

Yay! Twooster's is finally done! :elephant:

Here as requested, Twooster. :D I've done this lengthy critique about three times and my computer's deleted it every single time. So forgive me if I sound crabby. ‘Druuuuuuuth. We ...

Twooster, I've done you a critique three times and each time my klutzy fingers have managed to delete it from the depths of my computer. I think your critique simply ...

Aye aye. :wink:

Awww, thankyou so much for reading, June. You're such a darling.

Thankyou for reading, Demeter dahling and Rosey. You both rock for following this up. I'm revising it with your suggestions as vital guidelines. :wink:

Lord Anzius, the above says that multiple requests are no longer accepted. Twooster, I'm workin' on it. :wink:

Here as requested, Lucy Goosey. :wink: Don't be put off if I'm harsh, I'm only here to help. Silence: slowly I looked up at the neglected old house, a nice ...

Here as requested, Teddy! :D Blue, Purple and Red I agree with Kitty about this. There's nothing interesting or original about it, nothing dragging the reader in. Find a spark. ...

I'm getting to them, people. There may be somewhat of a long wait though as I'm on holiday now and intend to relax from critiquing for a while.

Thankyou for reading Rosey. I understand what you mean about it feeling detached. The reason for that is probably because this is the chapter before the action in this story ...