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  • General Fiction Novels Re: Broken - Prologue

    Demeter, Angel, Squall, Kirsten, and Rosey - thankyou so, so much for reviewing. This thanks is a bit belated for most of you, but it means so much to me ...

    Dec 11, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Tipping The Velvet {one}

    Agh, I feel like such an idiot. I don't normally have problems with my tenses at all, but lately I've been writing two stories; one in the past and one ...

    Dec 11, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Tipping The Velvet {one}

    This is a novel I have just started, set in the Victorian Times. It was previously set in 1920 but it was far too hard for me to write as ...

    Dec 10, 2008
  • WRFF Archive Re: Royal Reviews

    Done! :D

    Dec 10, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Famous Last Words

    Here as requested, dreamintechnicolour! [s]Unsure of themselves,[/s] they periodically hurl a handful of raindrops like gravel; then retreat as if to see if the tiny people on the sidewalk will ...

    Dec 10, 2008
  • WRFF Archive Re: There is no guarantee...

    Hi, Sorry, maybe the link didn't work in my post above. It was: Thanks a lot! -Sarah

    Dec 10, 2008
  • Novel Workshop Re: On Broken Wings

    Thankyou so, so much Kirsten. Any critiques I get on this are very much appreciated. Thankyou all. -Sarah

    Dec 10, 2008
  • WRFF Archive Re: Royal Reviews

    Dream - workin' on it now. :wink:

    Dec 10, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Broken - 10

    Thankyou so much, yrclever. It means a lot to me that you read it and that it touched you. Thankyou again. -Sarah

    Dec 9, 2008
  • Writing Tips Re: Outline?

    Also, I find novels are destroyed if they are planned; where's the spontaneity? Can your message really come across if it's hidden behind a titanium plot? Completely agree. Although, sometimes ...

    Dec 9, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: After Dark Ch.1 Alone

    Hey there, Memento! Before I start my critique, there's a rule on YWS that for every post you do, you must have 2 reviews. So browse the forums and find ...

    Dec 9, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: [deleted]

    Thankyou to everyone who read! :D You're all stars.

    Dec 9, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: So Goes the Museum

    Hey, Galerius! Here as requested. I'm tired, so forgive me if some of my comments make no sense. Breaking pillage dark of dust Maybe I'm just being slow, but I ...

    Dec 9, 2008
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Corrupt a Wish 2

    Granted, but you'll lose all your loved ones in the process. I wish I had a doughnut.

    Dec 9, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Survey

    1.Total number of books you own? Nearly a thousand. Seriously. My room is practically a library, there's no space to walk in because of the piles of books everywhere. 2.What ...

    Dec 9, 2008


"And what is the use of a book," thought Alice, "without pictures or conversations?"
— Lewis Carroll, Alice in Wonderland