CastlesInTheSky

Wow, Kirsten. This was breathtaking. To think I didn't even know you photographed. I agree, it just makes you want to go to Skye. For just a Samsung, the focus ...

Thankyou so much for reading, sofi. I really appreciate it. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thankyou again. -Sarah

One that goes along with that one is... You know you're a writer when you watch movies/tv and when the main character lies about something, you can make up one ...

Any more? I'm bored. >.

Angel, your critique's done. :D

The Queen is here as requested for the deathly one. :wink: Nitpicks first, Angel dahling. And random things I liked. Sleep wouldn't come. It played with my eyes, making them ...

NightMistress - I skimmed through the other chapters before reviewing this, or it would be unfair to you. I'm very sorry if I offended you by any of the things ...

Spot on, Sofi. :D That's exactly what it meant. Thanks for explaining it, dahling. x

Angel, the Queen will work on your story of Eternal Sunshine with pleasure.

Thankyou so much, everyone who read this. I've reviewed the whole quotes thing. Thankyou!

Jasmine - Nice to see you back! Thankyou very much for the review, it helped a lot. The spelling of 'pajamas' is 'pyjamas' in England. Thankyou for the tips on ...

Hey there, NightMistress! I'm Sarah and I'm your reviewer for today. I just stood there as I looked at the person in front of me. He was no longer the ...

Here as requested, Ashley! It looks like you need an indepth review, so I'll get cracking. :D Nitpicks first... Looking back on my life, I know that there are things ...

This is new...still working on it. Any type of suggestions are welcome. And any type of criticisms are welcome as well. Harsh works!!!! Yay! Jasmine you're back! *applause* Okay, harsh ...

Hey there! I liked this, it wasn't prententious and it wasn't trying to show off. The concept and ideas were good, if not a little bit, 'duh'. I think you ...