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Re: For Ali.
Hey there, SilverSunlight! Sarah here. XD Right, first things first. I liked this poem. It was simplistic, but that shows us that things don't always have to be intricately written ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: Some people
Hey there, writewatiwant. I'm Sarah and I'm your reviewer for today. My main concern with this poem is, though it has a good concept and ideas, you need to use ...
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Re: To See the Stars--Prologue
Hey there! I'm not going to do an indepth critique, as this all looks very polished. My main issue with this piece is: You're doing a lot of telling and ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: Adelaide, a Prologue.
Hey there, Kirsten! Just thought I'd give you one of my advice critiques, as I'm bored and need to get up my reviewing count. One of your greatest strengths in ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: Royal Reviews
I'm going off on a bit of a critique craze this weekend, so if you apply now, they'll all get done instantaneously.
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: Don't Fret
Hey there, kissthewitch! This is quite polished, and obviously edited, so I can focus on the storyline, a refreshing break from bad grammar and misspellings. The only technical thing I ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: My pathetic love story Chap. 2
Hey there, Icefire! I'm not going to do an indepth review as the awesome Squall has gone over all the points and I don't want to repeat everything he said. ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: A Modern Day Twist ~ One
*Drumroll* ... It's Sarah! XD Sorry if I sound harsh, as usual. You know me, nitpicking to death. The swift smell of Forget-Me-Not flowers rose my senses in a pleasant ...
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Re: Two Maidens
Hey there, Niteowl! I liked this. The last verse was poignant yet ironic. My favourite, possibly: Quote: The second maiden watched, her own heart now filled with bitter loneliness, and ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: I Want
Hey there, order! I'm Sarah and I'm going to be your reviewer for today. I'm not going to do a review as I'll probably just repeat everything Jig's said, which ...
Dec 6, 2008 -
Re: An Empire to Fall, A Hell to Die For
Hey there, Church! I'm Sarah and I'm your reviewer for today. I'm not going to do you an indepth review, as the amazing Jig has covered all the points, and ...
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Re: [deleted]
Aww Merry, thanks so much for reading. As usual, your reviews are amazingly heart-warming. Thankyou so, so much. Oh, by the way, 'mould' is the English spelling, lol. XD For ...
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Re: Royal Reviews
Any more?
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Re: [deleted]
Hehe. *flails* Remind me never to disagree with you again. :D Thankyou so much, Jiggity. Very much appreciated. x
Dec 6, 2008