CastlesInTheSky

Hi there Penguin. I'd be delighted if you could review this: Thankyou very much. Sarah x

Thankyou so much for the lengthy, detailed review, Jabber! It was extremely helpful. Sarah x

Okay CK Lynn, it's done!

Hey there, CK Lynn! Here as requested. I'm reviewing the updated/revised version, by the way, so don't worry that I've reviewed the first one, or whatever. “She’s dead, Clark. I ...

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Thankyou very much for your feedback, Demeter, Squall and CK Lynn. It is very much appreciated.

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Thanks for the review, Xena. :wink: If you'd looked closer, you would have seen that Jackie was a girl as I referred to her as 'her' and 'she.' ^_^ x

Hi, Jabber. *flutters eyelashes* Chapter 1, possibly? I am very much obliged. :wink: Sarah xxx

CK Lynn, I'm on the case. :wink:

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Banned for blaming your obvious procrastination on a harmless Anna-girl. ^_^

Hey there! -shakes hands- I'm Sarah and I'm your reviewer for today. Just one technicality: She looked across to the other table at the group of girls, as They laughed; ...

Done! Any more?

Hey there, Lucy! Here as promised. I read through the previous chapters and chose this one. ^_^ On with the reviewing. (I can be really, really harsh, but it's only ...