CastlesInTheSky

Thankyou so much for your review, Kirsten. You're always so encouraging. You are partially right about the Cathy/Heathcliff relationship, though it's obviously slightly less abusive than said relation

Hi There Kirsten! I just want to say first off- when I correct stuff, it's definitely not beacuse your writing's crap or anything. It's probably because your writing's so amazing ...

Aww thankyou so much for reading Kirsten. Though your skills in poetry far outweigh mine, anyone reading Truth could see that. XD xxx

lhighton - Yay! Spelt your name right this time! :P Thankyou so, so much for your comments. You really didn't owe me a review back as I love critiquing your ...

It's well, written, but nothing hooks me. Nothing screams out at me to continue reading. You have only a few pages to grab your reader’s attention. When you can hook ...

Thankyou very much for reading. :D It was meant as a one-off short story, but seeing as you enjoyed it so much, maybe I'll write a sequel when I have ...

Banned for having a link in your signature.

4/10 sorry it's not quite my style.

Banned for wanting to find a Munkustrap. ^_^

Hi Alainna! I totally owe you this critique, after your endless perservering with Broken. Erjo, here I am. Nit-picks ^_^ Quote : After that night, things went from normal, to ...

Well, by Demeter's recommendation, I'm going to post my story, "To Run with Wolves," in chapters here on the forum. This will be the second. The story is finished, but ...

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Hm...I like it, TL-G. It's a bit bewildering and jerky. I think this is an advantage, however, as it adds to the confusal of the reader, therefore intriguing them and ...

Couldn't resist some more... You know you're a writer when you've never had a boyfriend in real life, but in the world of fiction you are very taken. You type ...

You know you're a writer when: When any time anyone speaks, you add a mental description. ("She said while stroking her head thoughtfully.") You find yourself speaking in your writing ...