CastlesInTheSky

Thankyou very much, niccy. :D Take your time, by all means. I don't want to rush you. I'm not bumping the thread *promise* but I must stress that reviews are ...

Banned for not misspelling the word 'misspelling' and therefore giving me nothing grammatically/spelling-related to ban you on. ^_^

Snoink - Of course I don't mind waiting. It's fully worth it. ^_^ Sarah xxx

Thankyou so much for reading, Angel. You're all too too lovely for persevering with this. xxx

Thankyou so much for reading, Demeter. You're all so helpful. xxx

Thankyou so much for reading, Demeter. You've been wonderful, persevering with this all the way through. And in less than a day you got through 10 Chapters! Methinks a hug ...

My NaNo is dead. That is all. --- What happened? My characters developed minds of their own and proceeded to kill eachother, resulting in thousands of blank pages and no ...

Hey there! I'm not going to give you a full grammatical critique because I'm not quite awake and this looks very polished. You're obviously used to writing short stories. I ...

Hey there! :D I'm here, returning the favour. (: "Very funny, Aiden. Now turn it down." There was no arguing when she used that tone; I flicked the volume control. ...

Hi there! I first have to specify - you're not a bad writer, not in the least. You just need to make this original - make it your own. The ...

I really liked this. It was dark, emotional, powerful. You're obviously one for gothic poetry. A few tips: Because gothic poetry is dark and mysterious, it means there can't be ...

I loved this! Your poetry is so beautiful, Xavier. Favourite verse: Your love is like a river, overflowing in the sanctuary of my garden The flowers are becoming all wet ...

If not a bit cheesy, this was a very good poem which has good emotions and ideas. What you need to work one: Use concrete imagery and vivid descriptions. Love, ...

I loved this! :D The last line was very poignant. 'The water is about to overflow. Who will control the weight?' It evoked a very emotional response from me. Gave ...

Why can't I stop thinking about her? Good first line! Draws the reader in. The rhythm of her movements and technique glistens in the light of the moon as the ...