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Re: Bonjour. I go by 'Freak.'
Favourite Olivier movie? Hmm..t'would have to be Wuthering Heights, one of his earliest appearances. Or Rebecca, one of his latest appearances. Or Pride and Prejudice; somewhere in the middle of ...
Nov 23, 2008 -
Re: Have An Ice Day
Hi Demeter! Here as requested. I must say - I like the title. :lol: Very witty. Now for nitpicks! Slowly disappearing into white fluff, a sudden flash of ice sticks. ...
Nov 23, 2008 -
Re: The opening page to my novella
Hey, there, IHighton! I am so ready for this. -squeals- Somehow, Laura had known it would be May who rang that time. By no means was she psychic, or in ...
Nov 23, 2008 -
Re: Hey!
Hey there, PerpetualBridge! I'm Castles, or, Sarah. -shakes hand- I solemnly christen you Perpet, as PerpetualBridge is somewhat of a mouthful and we all have nicknames here. ^_^ So, welcome ...
Nov 23, 2008 -
Re: New to the Website!
Hey there Xavier! Welcome to our big, cuddly family! I'm sure you're gonna love it here! Like Clo said, take a quick peek at the rules. Before posting anything, we ...
Nov 23, 2008 -
Re: Broken - 10
Last chapter - and it's soo cliched! *groans* I need help. _______________________________ 10 – Swallow ‘Too much of water hast thou, poor Ophelia And therefore I forbid my tears, but ...
Nov 23, 2008 -
Re: The Handkerchief
My first attempt at poetry in years. It's probably terrible. ^_^ Tear apart, ya? ___________________________ The wind is suspiciously strong tonight, the rain dancing with the charming darkness in a ...
Nov 23, 2008 -
Re: Pig Droppings [Closed]
Name: On Broken Wings - Chapter 4 Genre: Realistic Fiction Summary: A story of a strange, misunderstood girl who seems to have a disorder and is haunted by her past. ...
Nov 23, 2008 -
Re: The Artist Gets a Compliment
Hello Snoink! I have to say, I really enjoyed this poem. There was something beautiful about it concealed between the words. The picture looks like this: it is flat and ...
Nov 23, 2008 -
Re: My notebook
You're welcome June. And that's exactly why I was torn about that rhyming problem - I doubt you could find a better substitute for what you're trying to convey; so ...
Nov 22, 2008 -
Re: My notebook
Hey June! I've been longing to critique something of yours for ages, so here goes! (By the way, it's only with excellent pieces of work that I get nit-picky, because ...
Nov 22, 2008 -
Re: Reviewer Testimonials
Sapphire gave me absolutely brilliant reviews. Furthermore, she didn't just review the chapter from the link I gave her and stop at that, she followed my chapter all the way ...
Nov 22, 2008 -
Re: There is no guarantee...
Hello there! Do you think you could be awesome and review 'On Broken Wings,' in advanced critiques: At your harshest, please. :wink: *cowers* Thankyou so much, and please tell me ...
Nov 22, 2008 -
Re: A Foggy Glass Chapter 5
Oh right, okay. (: You're welcome. Shame, it was an interesting story. x
Nov 22, 2008 -
Re: Poisoned Roses - Prologue & Ch. 1
Hi there, Ashleylee! I’d firstly liked to say that you’ve done a great job with this. When you’re writing a vampire story, it’s easy to fall into the trap of ...
Nov 22, 2008
