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CastlesInTheSky

  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback

    Um...something about a misunderstood teenager, possibly a rebel, who tries to stand out in every way she can. Or possibly about real pirates, me hearty. :wink: Dear Reader, Don't Read.

    Nov 7, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: You know you're a writer when...

    You know you're a writer when you wake up in the morning and all you can think about is writing, even in the most horrible situations, you're mulling over how ...

    Nov 7, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Until The End-Part 6

    ~Hey, everyone. Here's part 6. Negative reviews are welcomed. Enjoy!~ Alrighty! I've been reading all the way through so far but everyone's pointed out everything, so I thought I'd start ...

    Oct 31, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Until The End-Part 7

    Hello Merry (: This was an amazingly tense chapter, my eyes were glued to the words the whole time through. The tenseness wasn't achieved through blatant action happening in your ...

    Oct 31, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Broken - 6

    Thanks so much Merry (: I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I will try to post Chapter 8 up as soon as possible, I promise. Thankyou again for following Broken. ...

    Oct 31, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Broken - 7

    Hey Merry ! The guy was her dad, presumably. Maybe I was a bit too vague, I forgot the reader didn't know the plan I had in my head. Thankyou ...

    Oct 31, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Broken - 7

    Okay, the formatting's all messed up, so you're just going to have to imagine spaces in between the different bold and italics paragraphs. :D Chapter 7 Sarah opens her mouth ...

    Oct 27, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Broken - 6

    Aww thanks so much Kirsten (: That really, really helped because I was having real confidence issues with this particular chapter. Thankyou again for reading. xxx

    Oct 27, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Broken - 6

    Feedback, please? :wink: I really struggled with this chapter so tell me if it's absolutely horrendous and I'll scrap it. 6 A large, crooked Victorian house; three stories high with ...

    Oct 26, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Co-authors, Writing Buddies, Fellow Arists-Whatever You Will

    MY NAME: Sarah WHAT I LIKE TO WRITE: Realistic/Contemporary fiction, perhaps with a bit of romance but nothing too cliched, historical fiction as long as it's a period I know ...

    Oct 26, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Untouched-Epilogue

    GAH!! I'd just written a really long review and then my computer lost it all! Darn it. I know it's short. Any ideas to make it longer? [/quote] Okay, so. ...

    Oct 26, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: My letter

    He told us to open our notebooks to a blank page and to start writing. He didn’t specify what to write about, just write . I stared at him as ...

    Oct 26, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Watching Windows - Epilogue

    Okay, so this is the last chapter. Phew! I just wanted to say, thankyou so much to everyone who’s been reviewing during the course of this novel. Thankyou to those ...

    Oct 26, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Watching Windows - Chapter 23

    Okay guys...penultimate chapter. Part III: Chapter 23 It is the present time now, of course – the real present. If you can do your maths ok – even I can ...

    Oct 26, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Watching Windows - Chapter 22

    Chapter 22 I stopped off at the florist’s on my way to the funeral. Mum and Miss Alcock had asked to drive me, but I needed to walk there, for ...

    Oct 26, 2008


I want to see people turn and writhe; make them feel things they cannot see and sometimes do not know.
— Anna Held