CastlesInTheSky

[/b]A slightly ambiguous if not somewhat sketchy jotting that I wrote in five minutes. An example of my terrible attempts at poetry! Almost philosophical yet rather ambiguous. Make what you ...

Well, I suppose it was awful. I admit defeat ashamedly. :D *Hangs Head*

I'm reading "I Capture the Castle" by Dodie Smith. It's my third time and I never get bored of it. x

The last dance, for her, was like dancing with a broom. This is a very good, unique image to start the story with. It was stiff and very unentertaining . ...

this one's just one of my dinky stories. it's not too great, but i'm just putting it out there. enjoy. :] I will :D. But , by the way, just ...

Thank you so much :D I will try to improve on dialogue, and on making it more realistic. Thankyou again for reading. Sarah xxx

So maybe it doesn't seem like fantasy right now, but trust me, it will be. Although, the completion of this story is not guaranteed, so proceed with caution. Please critique ...

[b] Thank a lot, Merry.

My first story posted on a forum...anywhere. Let me know thoughts, comments, etc. And let me know if you'd like more, or if the topic is dull. (: Thanks! ______________________________________________

Okay, I had to write an essay about the Great Fire Of London on 1666, in newspaper article format. It's really,really horrible. I just have done an awful job of ...

Thankyou Merry :D Sarah xxx

Thanks so much, Alyce. I really appreciate your review. Oh, by the way, it wasn't exactly a blurb :D More of a short prologue. Thankyou again. Sarah xxx

Hello, Bittersweet. I know you hate the "OMG that's soo good" reviews, but this was really, really good. There was some beautiful use of imagery and your description is spot ...

Chapter 21 Everything happened really quickly after that. Kirsty and I screamed, “Ruby!” simultaneously, and rushed over to the edge, peering over, trying to see her in the pitch black. ...

Author's Note : This chapter is going to really, really, REALLY confuse you. That's the whole point. Don't worry, you will get an explanation eventually. Just go with it :D ...