CastlesInTheSky

Chapter 19 Mr Fenton read Shakespeare’s “To be or not to be” to us in English. When he had finished, he asked us, “So, what do you think? Do you ...

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Math hours could bring you at the brink of insanity!!! Refrain from using exclamation marks at the ends of your sentences, it takes maturity away from one's work. Rephrasal of ...

Wow, Snoink. This was actually hilarious. Where do you get it from? Your talent to write and be able to make people laugh? Favourite lines: Sometimes, if I want to ...

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Hey, Bittersweet :D I've been reading your amazing story all the way through and have found no major flaws with the plot so far. Might I go to add that ...

Chapter 18 It was nearly Christmas, and I was sitting on my dream-sill, watching snowflakes glaze the window, dreaming about the sound of whistling windchimes. I had just returned from ...

Author's Note: This is quite a short chapter, but I liked it's shortness, and it would have been overdone had I lengthened it. I didn't want to cram too many ...

Sophia stood there, bemused and bewildered. All she was thinking about was James and what he just told her. How can this be possible? I thought... Unintentional alliteration there - ...

Chapter Eleven “So, who’s Sebastian?” I asked, forgetting that little detail. [b](Authors note: Thanks Merry!!!) I had sat back on the bed, but across from Jasper. I couldn’t be near ...

Chapter Ten For the next few weeks, I went back and forth between Jasper and Damien. Jasper really did want this, even though he would become a monster. He kept ...

Haley sat at the top of the stairs clutching her empty glass. You need to insert a comma (,) after "clutching." It would have to be the usual creeping routine, ...