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Re: Sophia's Suitors-Chapter 7 Part 1
There were people everywhere. Ladies dressed in their finest white cotton muslins. With intricate patterns and stripes. The last two sentences need to be made into one sentence. Hence, "Ladies ...
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: Watching Windows - Chapter 17
Thanks for reading, Jasmine :D You're awesome, as usual. No, don't worry, Douglas isn't working for Kirsty, :lol: xxx
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: Watching Windows - Chapter 16
haha :lol: Jasmine, you're actually hilarious. Nah, I don't mind your review length. Short and sweet, eh? :D Thanks for reading. Sarah xxx
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: Watching Windows - Chapter 15
Hey :D Thanks so much jasmine, I love your reviews. Yep, you have the relationship between Amelia and Kirsty spot on :D Thanks again. Sarah xxx
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: Watching Windows - Chapter 16
[b] Thankyou so much, Sapphire! Kirsty was warning Amelia? Do I sense some future understanding between this pair? Ahahaha :D We'll have to wait and see. No, don't worry, I ...
Sep 13, 2008 -
Re: Watching Windows - Chapter 17
This has been heavily edited and updated, for those of you who read it previously!
Sep 13, 2008 -
Re: Watching Windows - Chapter 16
Aww, thanks so much, Merry :D Douglas will be back in the next chapter as well :D xxxx
Sep 12, 2008 -
Re: Watching Windows - Chapter 17
Chapter 17 “Don’t be like this. Please. Don’t be like this.” It was midnight on a Wednesday and I was trying to get a reaction out of Mum. She sat ...
Sep 11, 2008 -
Re: Watching Windows - Chapter 16
Chapter 16 “Oh my God!” shrieked Kirsty to her Mini-Ks the next morning, as we were waiting for Mr Graves to come in for double maths. “I can’t believe I ...
Sep 11, 2008 -
Re: Watching Windows - Chapter 14
Ahaha :D Thanks. Sorry you aren't getting hooked. :( :( :( :( :( :( :( I will try to make it hookable. :wink: --Sarah
Sep 11, 2008 -
Re: Untouched ch 9
Chapter Nine I refused Cameron’s hand, even in my dream, that night. Like in real life, he was furious with me. He took my arm anyway. He pulled me along ...
Sep 11, 2008 -
Re: Sophia's Suitors-Chapter 6 Part 2
~Hey, I'm back with part two. After finally doing some homwork, I finally finished this part. Yeah! :D So, I hope you all enjoy and like.~ Of course I will ...
Sep 11, 2008 -
Re: Broken - 4
Thanks so much, Merry. As usual your critiques are lovely and they help and encourage a lot. I'm so touched you're reading this all the way through. Thankyou again, you've ...
Sep 11, 2008 -
Re: Lake Girls Chapter one: Hotdogs and wine
[b]Hi, This is fourth try for the beginnig of Lake Girls. This one is defiantly my favorite. I have done a lot of tweeking, so please tell me if there ...
Sep 10, 2008 -
Re: Rooftop
This is for clograbby's contest, Lost In The Atmosphere. -- It hit me in the face -between the eyes I might add. Fanstastic beginning. SHould be a comma after "eyes". ...
Sep 10, 2008
