CastlesInTheSky

Well, here it is. My attempt at a short story. Plus, I'm writing it from a guy's point of view and so, guys, tell me if the main character sounds ...

Thankyou so much, ashleyee. You are being so motivating, I honestly didn't think it was that good, and you have me such a huge confidence boost. Thankyou :D xxx

Thankyou so much, jasmine and asheleey. I really appreciate your reviews :D xxx

Hehe :D Thanks a lot jasmine. Oh yeah, I forgot about the whole age thing. I'll review it :D Thanks again. [b]-Sarah

Edward smiled and put his arm around my waist. Even with all of the lights turned off and the curtains closed, I saw his beautiful face. I blinked and smiled ...

~Minor revisions. Since I'm writing another historical fiction, I just couldn't resist this one. So, enjoy!~ Ah, well, I'm all for historical fiction :D A clear water droplet trickled down ...

Chapter 13 Again I found myself sitting at the neat kitchen counters and pouring out tea. After I had stuffed the teapot with tea bags and put it on to ...

Hehe :D Thanks a lot jasmine :D As usual, I love hearing from you. I have 22 chapters and an epilogue in total, and seeing as this is the 12th ...

~It's been awhile since I've posted something up for this story. Sorry, everyone. Well, when school hits tomorrow, I'll probably won't be able to post something up til later. Enjoy!~ ...

Haha :D Don't worry, there's a load of loose ends at the moment but all the characters you've mentioned get brought back in, etc.. :D Thanks a lot for your ...

Hello readers. I have an english exam coming up this week and I'm preparing for it by writing practice essays for the texts that we studied in class. I would ...

I liked this. The first line, I hate my friends was a really good way to draw people in. Despite the one review, I think this is very good. I ...

haha, jasmine :D All your film casting and playlists make me laugh :lol: Now to the fun bit, a.k.a nitpicks. (:wink:) “Why do you even do it?” Jasper had asked. ...

Chapter 12 On Thursday, I got another permission note to skip a lesson so I could have another session with Susannah. I ignored the piece of paper sullenly, balling it ...

Okay well...here it is, finally :D Sorry Demeter and Jasmine for the long wait :D What can I say... :D Chapter 11 “When are you going to start confiding in ...